盼－－西女古意

沅湘

七年听子规，
默默拭泪处；
八载望眼穿，
魂与斜阳遇。
麦穗腾浪连天波，
巧手挥镰快如梭。
: D/ t7 n; o. l# `五月麦场掀流金，
轻衣舞动窈窕身；
- Z5 L7 ?$ R- l& u* S( |迎风扬秕播彩云，
播出一曲白头吟。
7 j9 E; n: A2 d$ O# Z5 ~( }& L苦也乐，
愁也乐，
; w* {6 F3 u8 G9 D5 @9 A; m愁云苦雨伴长歌。
1 _# o5 R# `7 V3 h; L2 i乐也误，
喜也误，
3 S0 ]  m$ z; ^1 Q9 |/ Y: X人去家乡无限路。
虽然墨香侵红袖，
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家国两地夏日长，
, J( V; `6 e) X' O6 B% j且抛麦粒挽夕阳；
9 Z4 V% o+ H1 G日下亲人若相望，
化雨千行复万行。

自注：此诗从西女Lucy 割麦的传说中化出。

无墨

哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
2 S5 ]: V; i6 [当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
$ G! E" V; N- \* W/ ^跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回忆~~~~

沅湘

Originally posted by 无墨 at 2006-6-15 12:58 PM:
$ [0 R2 t+ b& k' C; X8 ^哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
2 o: a! A( m0 X* J跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回 ...

& Y9 r7 `0 G* h, _9 V8 J我的这个西女是Lucy （露西，西方文化中一个很有名气的才女）转过来的，你一定也知道，故意说是西安的女子吧。等着看你的关于西安女子的文章。

新竹

Who is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-15 11:57 PM:
; Y( g7 t, E; U9 uWho is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

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Haven\'t seen you on line for a while. I guess you are very busy. Take care of your pretty voice, please.

There are many Lucy girls in English literature. I had both Wordsworth\'s and E. Browning\'s in mind.

新竹

There is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.
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Of all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.
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I am already burnt out (like aways). I would like to watch the World Cup too, but the TV is broken. You take care too.

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-26 02:34 PM:
! T7 j" `- P/ A7 |6 Q, Y! E5 MThere is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.

* j3 G$ ^: i! }' j. Z' pOf all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.
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There you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

oy98oy

顶才子!

林子丹

Originally posted by 沅湘 at 2006-6-27 01:59 AM:
0 B2 A* _' d# x6 m9 o2 QThere you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

The Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.

Nevertheless, this poem is good. ))

沅湘

Originally posted by 林子丹 at 2006-6-28 08:32 PM:
The Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.
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, f9 D  q" t! A* \9 s0 lNevertheless, this poem is good. ))