盼－－西女古意

沅湘

七年听子规，
7 ~; a* |& p5 i& ?- I/ ^默默拭泪处；
0 p+ p7 N1 x) \5 c" d7 ?3 ^7 \八载望眼穿，
+ D4 D1 q* J5 P; l魂与斜阳遇。
7 v+ o" i% s3 n9 P麦穗腾浪连天波，
) ~1 h- K8 [0 k7 b; U7 ~) z% _  d巧手挥镰快如梭。
五月麦场掀流金，
轻衣舞动窈窕身；
迎风扬秕播彩云，
& q: x* T$ A* m8 q2 o$ S播出一曲白头吟。
苦也乐，
) n6 b) h' a! A; Q愁也乐，
5 O0 s* [2 q: e* @8 T, e* O愁云苦雨伴长歌。
5 b( }0 n6 W8 i& `: K5 o2 u1 [3 Q乐也误，
喜也误，
人去家乡无限路。
虽然墨香侵红袖，
' p" B8 }0 i1 p: ~$ p  s也能麦穗作流苏。
! E+ H1 y1 x7 k" l$ e家国两地夏日长，
且抛麦粒挽夕阳；
6 T! R( _5 H1 y8 T5 M' x4 W日下亲人若相望，
化雨千行复万行。

" e& }' b% v3 }# c* i( q自注：此诗从西女Lucy 割麦的传说中化出。

无墨

哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
4 y, x0 z- M- u) o跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
. [1 Q, t0 E, ~: K不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回忆~~~~

沅湘

Originally posted by 无墨 at 2006-6-15 12:58 PM:
2 i+ x. ~1 m) u; a4 ]6 ~6 M哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
# G- ~7 z/ _% l* x2 s: c当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回 ...

/ r+ U, h* N0 ~1 A我的这个西女是Lucy （露西，西方文化中一个很有名气的才女）转过来的，你一定也知道，故意说是西安的女子吧。等着看你的关于西安女子的文章。

新竹

Who is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-15 11:57 PM:
Who is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

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7 B3 S/ k$ M5 T( U& Z2 GHaven\'t seen you on line for a while. I guess you are very busy. Take care of your pretty voice, please.

There are many Lucy girls in English literature. I had both Wordsworth\'s and E. Browning\'s in mind.

新竹

There is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.
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% ^& J2 j( w0 o9 X% k0 n# MOf all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.

I am already burnt out (like aways). I would like to watch the World Cup too, but the TV is broken. You take care too.

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-26 02:34 PM:
There is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.

9 b' q: e6 }; v& z. J* \5 [Of all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.
...

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& _) m3 \2 k6 t9 g7 m8 v, X  eThere you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

oy98oy

顶才子!

林子丹

Originally posted by 沅湘 at 2006-6-27 01:59 AM:
There you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

1 h: w/ v) N) ?2 iThe Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.
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* T4 K. R6 T7 dNevertheless, this poem is good. ))

沅湘

Originally posted by 林子丹 at 2006-6-28 08:32 PM:
- f. G! j* q' `/ _3 MThe Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.

8 E" _$ G& ]/ W2 ONevertheless, this poem is good. ))