盼－－西女古意

沅湘

七年听子规，
默默拭泪处；
' E1 Q! w2 R& J# Z7 I八载望眼穿，
魂与斜阳遇。
9 N. p( w  H) v1 g' M麦穗腾浪连天波，
巧手挥镰快如梭。
五月麦场掀流金，
轻衣舞动窈窕身；
  ?8 ~5 h$ x' L! K' U( O6 a4 x" W迎风扬秕播彩云，
播出一曲白头吟。
苦也乐，
愁也乐，
愁云苦雨伴长歌。
乐也误，
0 s* p. f! v' P, d, f3 m喜也误，
人去家乡无限路。
虽然墨香侵红袖，
也能麦穗作流苏。
0 q' u- P; I" [家国两地夏日长，
2 T9 D4 ]1 t* h2 }: _( r# F3 k且抛麦粒挽夕阳；
4 N$ ~/ @5 k  |- g' I2 d日下亲人若相望，
3 K. ]7 S  j9 M5 Y5 k; o4 X化雨千行复万行。

自注：此诗从西女Lucy 割麦的传说中化出。

无墨

哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
! Y3 e4 S+ |; m2 {2 t# H/ c! q( ^跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
8 j+ T, z! l8 w8 u) c0 a: y% }% r# g0 A不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回忆~~~~

沅湘

Originally posted by 无墨 at 2006-6-15 12:58 PM:
6 f/ K0 D6 K7 A1 C$ d哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
) d/ c, s# S% g( f" F当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
0 j" B1 l  C& q: _跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回 ...

! M! @! y0 o2 l5 J+ y我的这个西女是Lucy （露西，西方文化中一个很有名气的才女）转过来的，你一定也知道，故意说是西安的女子吧。等着看你的关于西安女子的文章。

新竹

Who is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-15 11:57 PM:
Who is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

Haven\'t seen you on line for a while. I guess you are very busy. Take care of your pretty voice, please.

! P0 e7 c0 e  ^* cThere are many Lucy girls in English literature. I had both Wordsworth\'s and E. Browning\'s in mind.

新竹

There is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.
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! @! R& y! O% ^' YOf all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.

I am already burnt out (like aways). I would like to watch the World Cup too, but the TV is broken. You take care too.

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-26 02:34 PM:
There is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.
4 \  w* q  n) t7 L+ D; Z8 R% |' h8 i
Of all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.
...

/ @6 F+ Y+ `3 B, f0 p6 T0 fThere you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

oy98oy

顶才子!

林子丹

Originally posted by 沅湘 at 2006-6-27 01:59 AM:
2 V, h! m6 w6 l" nThere you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

The Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.
8 f' `/ t# T) a$ t# k
1 e* p) h, z& c2 bNevertheless, this poem is good. ))

沅湘

Originally posted by 林子丹 at 2006-6-28 08:32 PM:
The Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.

, K6 }# N) c: cNevertheless, this poem is good. ))