盼－－西女古意

沅湘

七年听子规，
默默拭泪处；
; w  w+ d  v. E6 q( Q6 g: ?八载望眼穿，
魂与斜阳遇。
4 e* h/ k9 ~7 I% s+ A麦穗腾浪连天波，
巧手挥镰快如梭。
五月麦场掀流金，
; [2 c8 q3 [' A4 j/ I轻衣舞动窈窕身；
* i, H5 L7 u) i4 K6 [迎风扬秕播彩云，
* B3 N& x" Z* A# n播出一曲白头吟。
苦也乐，
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愁云苦雨伴长歌。
8 _* {5 b5 \4 V" |3 |& F2 x7 v2 U乐也误，
喜也误，
人去家乡无限路。
; n) G, K# E6 f. d$ R% W虽然墨香侵红袖，
( g' m/ M) v; l) ?6 P也能麦穗作流苏。
, t/ U, c/ `- o2 k& k家国两地夏日长，
且抛麦粒挽夕阳；
日下亲人若相望，
+ n! i) n, j2 s3 m( Z, u6 x# u化雨千行复万行。
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自注：此诗从西女Lucy 割麦的传说中化出。

无墨

哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回忆~~~~

沅湘

Originally posted by 无墨 at 2006-6-15 12:58 PM:
哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
7 _& p3 p' k6 j9 r& X5 ^/ v当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
0 m' `# I2 x; z6 V  K+ r5 }/ t不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回 ...

3 ^5 [6 H6 }: _9 o我的这个西女是Lucy （露西，西方文化中一个很有名气的才女）转过来的，你一定也知道，故意说是西安的女子吧。等着看你的关于西安女子的文章。

新竹

Who is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-15 11:57 PM:
* }- C- Q$ D& v8 {5 `5 |Who is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

Haven\'t seen you on line for a while. I guess you are very busy. Take care of your pretty voice, please.

+ t( T1 T5 ]" a  K: _# P  ZThere are many Lucy girls in English literature. I had both Wordsworth\'s and E. Browning\'s in mind.

新竹

There is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.

Of all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.
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I am already burnt out (like aways). I would like to watch the World Cup too, but the TV is broken. You take care too.

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-26 02:34 PM:
4 y% y6 l: {1 M; e! n) lThere is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.
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Of all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.
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7 n3 A: c" t/ K/ o! {: r3 GThere you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

oy98oy

顶才子!

林子丹

Originally posted by 沅湘 at 2006-6-27 01:59 AM:
There you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

The Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.
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Nevertheless, this poem is good. ))

沅湘

Originally posted by 林子丹 at 2006-6-28 08:32 PM:
5 [; B7 k: c; OThe Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.
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# T* O" [# p0 xNevertheless, this poem is good. ))