盼－－西女古意

沅湘

七年听子规，
默默拭泪处；
八载望眼穿，
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* t  K; @( d1 v! J麦穗腾浪连天波，
. m# E) Y) ^  b+ B; s巧手挥镰快如梭。
9 L5 w% K6 C' B+ w五月麦场掀流金，
轻衣舞动窈窕身；
迎风扬秕播彩云，
" G& X( z" K9 ?3 B1 `播出一曲白头吟。
苦也乐，
# T# |4 ~. r! c9 J* F$ |$ P: E愁也乐，
0 D- n8 Z! R9 o* D: |* @4 d愁云苦雨伴长歌。
乐也误，
喜也误，
人去家乡无限路。
虽然墨香侵红袖，
也能麦穗作流苏。
1 A4 n5 |- r+ y, ?家国两地夏日长，
# J+ M- q. s& _且抛麦粒挽夕阳；
: ]7 [- l  Y& R2 V/ B) }' F日下亲人若相望，
4 h9 E. n/ L1 y1 W' b$ b5 @化雨千行复万行。

4 N  t% x& T; F自注：此诗从西女Lucy 割麦的传说中化出。

无墨

哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
) l; C; b0 t: s1 ]+ ^! ?  `/ R9 `不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回忆~~~~

沅湘

Originally posted by 无墨 at 2006-6-15 12:58 PM:
& @% D- K  ?! J* c0 L9 O哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
7 B1 V5 u1 `2 v% ]6 U当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
0 N  s4 d" V" `0 N" m不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回 ...

我的这个西女是Lucy （露西，西方文化中一个很有名气的才女）转过来的，你一定也知道，故意说是西安的女子吧。等着看你的关于西安女子的文章。

新竹

Who is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-15 11:57 PM:
* k9 V; p; s& Y3 Q) A% TWho is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

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Haven\'t seen you on line for a while. I guess you are very busy. Take care of your pretty voice, please.

, Z; M+ Q  Z! B' `. [There are many Lucy girls in English literature. I had both Wordsworth\'s and E. Browning\'s in mind.

新竹

There is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.

Of all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.
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I am already burnt out (like aways). I would like to watch the World Cup too, but the TV is broken. You take care too.

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-26 02:34 PM:
, z' K% d0 t7 S: g( yThere is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.

Of all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.
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) w5 G& d) ~5 w" u  l) QThere you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

oy98oy

顶才子!

林子丹

Originally posted by 沅湘 at 2006-6-27 01:59 AM:
There you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

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: Y* d! L3 p+ R$ G2 jThe Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.
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Nevertheless, this poem is good. ))

沅湘

Originally posted by 林子丹 at 2006-6-28 08:32 PM:
The Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.
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Nevertheless, this poem is good. ))