盼－－西女古意

沅湘

七年听子规，
默默拭泪处；
1 @% F2 W- [3 q5 M  J八载望眼穿，
魂与斜阳遇。
麦穗腾浪连天波，
5 [% X& b/ V# [8 p* p' m9 C巧手挥镰快如梭。
五月麦场掀流金，
) s8 r8 H; u* R6 \; F" ?轻衣舞动窈窕身；
迎风扬秕播彩云，
* k: r+ z  o9 P  e, E播出一曲白头吟。
; G/ M0 M& S% k% A9 n苦也乐，
愁也乐，
6 G6 u- K7 F$ e愁云苦雨伴长歌。
乐也误，
喜也误，
人去家乡无限路。
虽然墨香侵红袖，
0 E- K# Q; Y7 x) _$ y也能麦穗作流苏。
家国两地夏日长，
且抛麦粒挽夕阳；
日下亲人若相望，
4 i( x, z$ @0 e& e7 J化雨千行复万行。
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自注：此诗从西女Lucy 割麦的传说中化出。

无墨

哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
6 g: z+ s: O' K2 U6 @* J当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回忆~~~~

沅湘

Originally posted by 无墨 at 2006-6-15 12:58 PM:
哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
3 @8 c8 s) s+ J1 o4 o3 ^当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
* p9 U+ ]# m& M6 Z不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回 ...

* m& C6 Q& h* l+ j我的这个西女是Lucy （露西，西方文化中一个很有名气的才女）转过来的，你一定也知道，故意说是西安的女子吧。等着看你的关于西安女子的文章。

新竹

Who is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-15 11:57 PM:
; Z- {% n: X" b4 e- QWho is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

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Haven\'t seen you on line for a while. I guess you are very busy. Take care of your pretty voice, please.

There are many Lucy girls in English literature. I had both Wordsworth\'s and E. Browning\'s in mind.

新竹

There is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.

1 v5 g/ D: G5 q, l9 SOf all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.
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6 }3 |0 K* v+ A& S% U7 x  FI am already burnt out (like aways). I would like to watch the World Cup too, but the TV is broken. You take care too.

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-26 02:34 PM:
There is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.
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# }6 u6 F- _% j3 D! aOf all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.
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7 v( D6 V7 O1 H6 Y/ L" G) sThere you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

oy98oy

顶才子!

林子丹

Originally posted by 沅湘 at 2006-6-27 01:59 AM:
There you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

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& X& u# C, k  y; A* {The Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.

. P, V: I" Z9 M4 O4 oNevertheless, this poem is good. ))

沅湘

Originally posted by 林子丹 at 2006-6-28 08:32 PM:
0 ]# F: i% \! b3 m) ^* dThe Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.
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Nevertheless, this poem is good. ))