盼－－西女古意

沅湘

七年听子规，
默默拭泪处；
9 y4 N2 a2 l- W, H$ b8 x+ v八载望眼穿，
0 R3 U3 I* Y7 r/ [" z+ D8 {5 {魂与斜阳遇。
) O& E4 u! ~/ h+ y( B5 h2 T4 ^麦穗腾浪连天波，
巧手挥镰快如梭。
五月麦场掀流金，
" k) [$ r- w- F5 p轻衣舞动窈窕身；
: l- G. `* B7 E& Y0 M0 I迎风扬秕播彩云，
/ s* Y5 H4 }/ F% F播出一曲白头吟。
苦也乐，
! p% I" E" e" n* d愁也乐，
愁云苦雨伴长歌。
乐也误，
3 b, K9 T$ Y- t3 _2 l0 ]喜也误，
人去家乡无限路。
/ l0 L2 [  }1 ~, w6 v虽然墨香侵红袖，
1 \" K! a! v6 f3 @也能麦穗作流苏。
6 @9 V& o) X" T8 l家国两地夏日长，
且抛麦粒挽夕阳；
日下亲人若相望，
化雨千行复万行。

自注：此诗从西女Lucy 割麦的传说中化出。

无墨

哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回忆~~~~

沅湘

Originally posted by 无墨 at 2006-6-15 12:58 PM:
哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
( J+ ?: }4 c( g5 Z0 K( b; S  a# ]跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回 ...

我的这个西女是Lucy （露西，西方文化中一个很有名气的才女）转过来的，你一定也知道，故意说是西安的女子吧。等着看你的关于西安女子的文章。

新竹

Who is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-15 11:57 PM:
" g' r" y* H, m: k/ E! R& kWho is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

Haven\'t seen you on line for a while. I guess you are very busy. Take care of your pretty voice, please.
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6 ^  f7 T8 q+ j4 p9 |2 P0 vThere are many Lucy girls in English literature. I had both Wordsworth\'s and E. Browning\'s in mind.

新竹

There is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.
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Of all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.

I am already burnt out (like aways). I would like to watch the World Cup too, but the TV is broken. You take care too.

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-26 02:34 PM:
There is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.

, e3 b5 F9 Y6 Z9 K" C! i  @Of all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.
0 M; P5 Y9 m6 p: H9 j ...

% Y8 _2 o& W8 l( ?) sThere you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

oy98oy

顶才子!

林子丹

Originally posted by 沅湘 at 2006-6-27 01:59 AM:
. i( ^  I6 ?8 U" pThere you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

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The Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.

Nevertheless, this poem is good. ))

沅湘

Originally posted by 林子丹 at 2006-6-28 08:32 PM:
5 s& S9 f$ V7 I5 Z6 u1 R/ p7 BThe Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.

Nevertheless, this poem is good. ))