盼－－西女古意

沅湘

七年听子规，
- Z2 H  g- p1 H. i( K  X* j默默拭泪处；
八载望眼穿，
魂与斜阳遇。
麦穗腾浪连天波，
: P6 E; J  a5 U" Z巧手挥镰快如梭。
五月麦场掀流金，
轻衣舞动窈窕身；
迎风扬秕播彩云，
播出一曲白头吟。
苦也乐，
愁也乐，
愁云苦雨伴长歌。
$ ?/ W' I6 i# E6 Q3 X8 l1 I乐也误，
1 |" o) z) G$ T1 j! X, v8 y0 F% q喜也误，
人去家乡无限路。
虽然墨香侵红袖，
也能麦穗作流苏。
/ ~8 `% S8 _0 ]1 @0 N( d  g( ?家国两地夏日长，
且抛麦粒挽夕阳；
4 m6 \( s$ k/ w! M7 g日下亲人若相望，
化雨千行复万行。

" ^1 v  F' O; W4 s7 C/ ]* q自注：此诗从西女Lucy 割麦的传说中化出。

无墨

哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
" u8 `) Z4 X, R. e4 B1 V当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
# [3 D5 a$ ]: m" m. h6 d4 I跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回忆~~~~

沅湘

Originally posted by 无墨 at 2006-6-15 12:58 PM:
9 r# s% E0 X0 z( l: f( O哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
! @/ E9 W& w6 o/ C跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
' n7 z1 d' t$ C2 Z" J不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回 ...

我的这个西女是Lucy （露西，西方文化中一个很有名气的才女）转过来的，你一定也知道，故意说是西安的女子吧。等着看你的关于西安女子的文章。

新竹

Who is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-15 11:57 PM:
/ D& c/ z0 k# H% T  x% q8 K5 lWho is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

Haven\'t seen you on line for a while. I guess you are very busy. Take care of your pretty voice, please.

There are many Lucy girls in English literature. I had both Wordsworth\'s and E. Browning\'s in mind.

新竹

There is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.
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' m1 [# ?0 K6 ^0 z4 wOf all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.

I am already burnt out (like aways). I would like to watch the World Cup too, but the TV is broken. You take care too.

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-26 02:34 PM:
) Y. V" a$ o6 z) @- Z; g8 EThere is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.
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  j+ n: ]8 Q) ^& T. e$ u8 X* k# f- DOf all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.
5 C6 S8 m& |3 U: ` ...

There you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

oy98oy

顶才子!

林子丹

Originally posted by 沅湘 at 2006-6-27 01:59 AM:
There you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

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The Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.

! J6 w; y, d, C7 INevertheless, this poem is good. ))

沅湘

Originally posted by 林子丹 at 2006-6-28 08:32 PM:
0 v; ^; u! M& DThe Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.
% W- L  ]& j2 |; ~  U5 ^% j0 W! B1 \
& H$ z# A0 f2 ?) C: fNevertheless, this poem is good. ))