盼－－西女古意

沅湘

七年听子规，
. r2 M+ G* U- C默默拭泪处；
! n0 Q2 t: R2 ]8 R6 _0 u八载望眼穿，
魂与斜阳遇。
麦穗腾浪连天波，
巧手挥镰快如梭。
. l$ ^2 s  p7 ?7 Z+ `五月麦场掀流金，
+ g- z: i9 K, W2 r3 b轻衣舞动窈窕身；
迎风扬秕播彩云，
  }8 r; g) O* Z+ U1 |9 Y播出一曲白头吟。
- L6 M- A- x8 G& j苦也乐，
愁也乐，
5 u+ G: Q5 c: Z5 k愁云苦雨伴长歌。
乐也误，
+ M( w( i9 p* m7 g# f' C喜也误，
0 @3 }' O, z9 _/ ]( `  b人去家乡无限路。
虽然墨香侵红袖，
$ S$ N0 S1 P' Y也能麦穗作流苏。
家国两地夏日长，
且抛麦粒挽夕阳；
日下亲人若相望，
7 O% O% w$ I, G, Z9 E, D7 g# _1 ~化雨千行复万行。

- ~; v. f7 ~8 k& [自注：此诗从西女Lucy 割麦的传说中化出。

无墨

哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
- m% l1 K: `9 C! O0 o当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
, f( _2 q7 n3 t  s+ ?* v1 D跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回忆~~~~

沅湘

Originally posted by 无墨 at 2006-6-15 12:58 PM:
哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
! X) o" K+ C" a. v7 [+ A$ h' [不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回 ...

我的这个西女是Lucy （露西，西方文化中一个很有名气的才女）转过来的，你一定也知道，故意说是西安的女子吧。等着看你的关于西安女子的文章。

新竹

Who is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-15 11:57 PM:
7 {, P* _' O; gWho is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

9 U: r2 S/ Z+ KHaven\'t seen you on line for a while. I guess you are very busy. Take care of your pretty voice, please.
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6 Y/ P" Z- Z% MThere are many Lucy girls in English literature. I had both Wordsworth\'s and E. Browning\'s in mind.

新竹

There is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.
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Of all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.
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I am already burnt out (like aways). I would like to watch the World Cup too, but the TV is broken. You take care too.

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-26 02:34 PM:
3 V% ^/ n6 g  S: SThere is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.
# f' @6 P" a, W% Q/ D' z/ J, j
Of all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.
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There you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

oy98oy

顶才子!

林子丹

Originally posted by 沅湘 at 2006-6-27 01:59 AM:
There you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

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The Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.

Nevertheless, this poem is good. ))

沅湘

Originally posted by 林子丹 at 2006-6-28 08:32 PM:
! Z2 a7 G; u& d' E* T9 P) eThe Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.
. ]7 g+ ^9 R  m0 ~! R
0 @$ k' |! [! x$ Y9 J& D; a& k/ tNevertheless, this poem is good. ))