各位来帮忙~~~~

luye3517

我没办法才来求助的啊。各位帮帮忙啊。
下面这段话是我毕业论文的摘要，哪位可以帮我翻译成英语啊？我一看到“鸡肠子”就头晕了。其中的专业术语可以不用翻译的。

随着科学技术的发展，各种电器对电源的要求越来越高，电源已成为一门独立的电子研究课题。各种电子电路都需要用到直流电源，这种电源虽然可以直接使用干电池，但比较经济实用的方法是利用由交流电源经过变换而成的直流稳压电源。直流稳压电源可以由分立元件构成，也可以由集成电路构成；可以采用传统的电源变压器方式，也可以采用目前流行的开关电源方式。本文所涉及的是利用集成稳压器设计的直流稳压电源。这种方式具有制作简单，稳定度较高，成本低等的优点。
本文所做的工作主要如下：
1.        简要概述了各种电源技术的背景以及电源变换的一般原理。
2.        阐诉了直流电源系统的构成极其工作原理。
3.        分析了本系统设计过程中的技术难点、重点和特殊点。
4.        设计并分析了了各种保护措施，包括过流保护，过压保护和过热保护。
5.        分析并解决了设计过程中的若干技术问题。
6.        利用计算机仿真系统（EWB）进行了系统的测试和分析。

luye3517

下面是我试着翻译的几句，各位帮改改错：
Abstract
With the modern science and technology developing, various kinds of electric apparatuses expecting the power better and better.
The technology of the power has became an independent technology of electronics.

peekaboo

一个建议：如果想写出好的英文，最好不要以中文方式来思考，再翻译成英文，这样很容易写成Chi-English。一个比较简单的方法是你找几篇相关的专业文章，看看别人的abstract怎么写的，完全可以照搬你认为好的句式，只要把你的意思表达出来就好啦，不用完全照翻你的原文。
你的第一句没有谓语，是大忌。另外过于口语话--“better an better”，可不可以改成：
With the development of the modern science and technology, various kinds of electric aparatuses are expecting better performance of the power（电源--power supply?） The technology of the power has become an independent area of electronics.
还是感觉怪怪的，请其他人提出更好的意见。

[ Last edited by peekaboo on 2004-3-16 at 02:23 PM ]

Po

随着科学技术的发展，各种电器对电源的要求越来越高，电源已成为一门独立的电子研究课题。各种电子电路都需要用到直流电源，这种电源虽然可以直接使用干电池，但比较经济实用的方法是利用由交流电源经过变换而成的直流稳压电源。
The development of technology in electric appliances calls for high quality and more reliable power supply. Power supply has become an independent research subject in electronics. All types of electronic curcuits require direct current (DC) supply. Although DC supply can be provided by battery cells, a more economic way is to convert alternating current into direct current.

jessica

不好意思，这我帮不了忙，英文实在太差:

luye3517

吼吼~~感谢PO和Peekboo，初稿已经出来了，大家在帮改改：
With the development of modern science and technology, various kinds of electric appliances are more and more high to the power source request. The technology of power source has become an independent electronic research subject. Many kinds of electronic circuits require Direct Current power supply(DC), although DC supply can be provided by battery cells, a more economical and practical way is to convert  Alternating Current supply into Direct Current source. Direct Current Voltage-stabilized source may by the discrete component constitution, also may by the integrated circuit constitution; May use traditional power transformer way, also may select a popular method of Switching Power Supply. What this paper involves is Direct Current Voltage-stabilized source which designs by using the integrated manostat. This way has the merit of manufacture simply, stability higher, the cost is low and so on.
The main contribution of this paper are :
1. Briefly introduce the power source technology background and the general principle of power source transforms.
2. Elaborated the Direct-Current Power Supply system constitution and its the principle of work.
3. Analyzed this system’s technical difficulties, keys and the special spots.
4. Designed and has analyzed many kinds of protective measures, including overcurrent protection, overvoltage protection and excessively hot protection.
5. Analyzed and has solved in the design process certain technical questions.
6. The Computer Simulation System(EWB) has carried on the system test and the analysis.

[ Last edited by luye3517 on 2004-3-17 at 03:09 AM ]

peekaboo

看了po的翻译才知道什么叫大师，luye请教po是绝对没有问题的，保你论文拿优。