盼－－西女古意

沅湘

七年听子规，
默默拭泪处；
. e$ h4 _; P7 V八载望眼穿，
魂与斜阳遇。
麦穗腾浪连天波，
巧手挥镰快如梭。
五月麦场掀流金，
$ ~& R  T) l* k7 D轻衣舞动窈窕身；
迎风扬秕播彩云，
播出一曲白头吟。
: f: s7 A6 W0 C4 R+ E' b) [- ?苦也乐，
* D4 g) k0 v2 S. I& C愁也乐，
7 G* e' J; {$ ~* |+ k# w$ }愁云苦雨伴长歌。
乐也误，
- W% ~! d! r& l) F# ^1 w" }/ s喜也误，
" x; g, T6 v: v7 M人去家乡无限路。
  `; L4 O9 h3 v/ k  a" }虽然墨香侵红袖，
也能麦穗作流苏。
/ X- q3 N) M$ S家国两地夏日长，
且抛麦粒挽夕阳；
$ i( k  A; m  h" `/ q" x7 O日下亲人若相望，
, Q( q" ?+ G1 {) n& |3 P: _8 v化雨千行复万行。

自注：此诗从西女Lucy 割麦的传说中化出。

无墨

哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
- [" B, c9 F6 ]/ Y2 _6 S" b3 \. ?当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
1 |2 k# K  ?, j8 F* G4 X: Y9 S# }跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回忆~~~~

沅湘

Originally posted by 无墨 at 2006-6-15 12:58 PM:
/ p" X  W+ R( |% n) b) i: ^哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
2 o% X- L) V  a" `  C跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
" g  h+ O( F5 ~, a不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回 ...

我的这个西女是Lucy （露西，西方文化中一个很有名气的才女）转过来的，你一定也知道，故意说是西安的女子吧。等着看你的关于西安女子的文章。

新竹

Who is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-15 11:57 PM:
Who is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

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( }. y9 c5 S+ `1 Y) \Haven\'t seen you on line for a while. I guess you are very busy. Take care of your pretty voice, please.

There are many Lucy girls in English literature. I had both Wordsworth\'s and E. Browning\'s in mind.

新竹

There is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.
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$ X6 R- @6 V; Z! Y6 z* w+ k/ \9 g& T+ SOf all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.

I am already burnt out (like aways). I would like to watch the World Cup too, but the TV is broken. You take care too.

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-26 02:34 PM:
There is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.
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Of all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.
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There you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

oy98oy

顶才子!

林子丹

Originally posted by 沅湘 at 2006-6-27 01:59 AM:
There you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

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The Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.

Nevertheless, this poem is good. ))

沅湘

Originally posted by 林子丹 at 2006-6-28 08:32 PM:
The Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.

3 d3 `2 C& H  [4 _3 C. y0 a8 \Nevertheless, this poem is good. ))