盼－－西女古意

沅湘 · 发表于 2006-6-15 14:23:09

七年听子规，
默默拭泪处；
八载望眼穿，
魂与斜阳遇。
麦穗腾浪连天波，
巧手挥镰快如梭。
五月麦场掀流金，
轻衣舞动窈窕身；
迎风扬秕播彩云，
播出一曲白头吟。
苦也乐，
愁也乐，
愁云苦雨伴长歌。
乐也误，
喜也误，
人去家乡无限路。
虽然墨香侵红袖，
也能麦穗作流苏。
家国两地夏日长，
且抛麦粒挽夕阳；
日下亲人若相望，
化雨千行复万行。

自注：此诗从西女Lucy 割麦的传说中化出。

无墨 · 发表于 2006-6-16 00:58:44

哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回忆~~~~

沅湘 · 发表于 2006-6-16 08:02:25

Originally posted by 无墨 at 2006-6-15 12:58 PM:
6 L9 n9 w5 x3 j, E Q- T! ]哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!% C" [1 {' O" H/ S
当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的- V6 f/ e5 E8 v8 J* d, h6 k8 S
跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,/ K# `" a; f# e' v
不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回 ...

我的这个西女是Lucy （露西，西方文化中一个很有名气的才女）转过来的，你一定也知道，故意说是西安的女子吧。等着看你的关于西安女子的文章。

新竹 · 发表于 2006-6-16 11:57:49

Who is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

沅湘 · 发表于 2006-6-24 12:41:24

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-15 11:57 PM:- `: _9 U/ K5 C) ?& H& O/ O
Who is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

Haven\'t seen you on line for a while. I guess you are very busy. Take care of your pretty voice, please.

There are many Lucy girls in English literature. I had both Wordsworth\'s and E. Browning\'s in mind.

新竹 · 发表于 2006-6-27 02:34:02

There is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.

Of all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.

I am already burnt out (like aways). I would like to watch the World Cup too, but the TV is broken. You take care too.

沅湘 · 发表于 2006-6-27 13:59:53

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-26 02:34 PM:1 J9 V$ |( u5 y& j
There is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class. 7 M! u* F0 v) z/ ] e6 r7 X
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Of all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.
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There you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

oy98oy · 发表于 2006-6-28 01:10:26

顶才子!

林子丹 · 发表于 2006-6-29 08:32:15

Originally posted by 沅湘 at 2006-6-27 01:59 AM:
t' u; u8 C4 w9 {" W. zThere you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

The Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.

Nevertheless, this poem is good.

))

沅湘 · 发表于 2006-7-9 11:31:24

Originally posted by 林子丹 at 2006-6-28 08:32 PM:$ N- d2 {0 b; J4 l5 D
The Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.
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Nevertheless, this poem is good. ))

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