盼－－西女古意

沅湘

七年听子规，
3 R8 [  y0 _% ^' M' Q默默拭泪处；
$ m4 h* b1 ?. y# [7 ~八载望眼穿，
) X0 j) t. ~- H3 D2 u0 S* `魂与斜阳遇。
麦穗腾浪连天波，
# [9 C) K3 q- x3 N. v. `巧手挥镰快如梭。
五月麦场掀流金，
8 @- A  d) s: j3 ~2 m轻衣舞动窈窕身；
迎风扬秕播彩云，
播出一曲白头吟。
苦也乐，
  J2 i) j( s6 ?$ K0 K6 y愁也乐，
) s2 v' G9 f( [% D0 D愁云苦雨伴长歌。
) Q  B6 {; z% S2 O2 q乐也误，
喜也误，
人去家乡无限路。
! ], V7 X! d$ v( F  Y! k$ b& s' ~虽然墨香侵红袖，
也能麦穗作流苏。
家国两地夏日长，
+ [- U9 O% k+ L7 J1 z: q且抛麦粒挽夕阳；
日下亲人若相望，
化雨千行复万行。
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0 w3 {- ?3 g/ T$ d自注：此诗从西女Lucy 割麦的传说中化出。

无墨

哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
# q9 f  X# ]: ^4 L& @当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
. n% o1 c  W' h, c2 e6 P跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
3 W: e! K4 t. J- y% h6 s不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回忆~~~~

沅湘

Originally posted by 无墨 at 2006-6-15 12:58 PM:
哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
# v6 z, I$ T% @4 c7 x& J跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回 ...

  W: P/ ?3 I" ^7 o( r我的这个西女是Lucy （露西，西方文化中一个很有名气的才女）转过来的，你一定也知道，故意说是西安的女子吧。等着看你的关于西安女子的文章。

新竹

Who is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-15 11:57 PM:
Who is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

Haven\'t seen you on line for a while. I guess you are very busy. Take care of your pretty voice, please.
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There are many Lucy girls in English literature. I had both Wordsworth\'s and E. Browning\'s in mind.

新竹

There is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.

Of all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.

I am already burnt out (like aways). I would like to watch the World Cup too, but the TV is broken. You take care too.

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-26 02:34 PM:
# G- q6 Q- [2 v" |3 @9 t# `9 K; aThere is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.

* e) w/ C, R* O$ O1 u& AOf all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.
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4 i9 A0 t3 @( R0 ?) l+ LThere you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

oy98oy

顶才子!

林子丹

Originally posted by 沅湘 at 2006-6-27 01:59 AM:
There you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

The Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.

/ W) b( ]7 R; A4 E8 [7 _Nevertheless, this poem is good. ))

沅湘

Originally posted by 林子丹 at 2006-6-28 08:32 PM:
The Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.
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% P9 {5 |( _. XNevertheless, this poem is good. ))