盼－－西女古意

沅湘

七年听子规，
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$ g8 s) _# p# c$ R八载望眼穿，
魂与斜阳遇。
麦穗腾浪连天波，
7 z- S$ X7 m9 @0 ]巧手挥镰快如梭。
' c. h# S8 n; R9 Z% u五月麦场掀流金，
1 z( f# z; ]1 f( x* m" {轻衣舞动窈窕身；
- s, Y- Z; q" S; x3 Y$ b4 B迎风扬秕播彩云，
播出一曲白头吟。
苦也乐，
愁也乐，
愁云苦雨伴长歌。
乐也误，
, v5 \' x( O. F: N9 f+ y5 A) [喜也误，
" `5 F) l  _! E6 `7 I8 e人去家乡无限路。
9 M7 C! ?$ Y/ X0 P虽然墨香侵红袖，
- O& e; w/ O4 f. M也能麦穗作流苏。
4 o9 Z# ?3 P1 D6 C家国两地夏日长，
; K' i  K  `* d; T( x且抛麦粒挽夕阳；
日下亲人若相望，
! g" p3 Z* }3 Q, x6 H8 e7 q) A" q' K化雨千行复万行。
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" X& b% p* [$ S  O6 O, i自注：此诗从西女Lucy 割麦的传说中化出。

无墨

哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
2 v) A1 s2 l$ d$ x4 B6 `, s& j当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
9 {2 ~# j% @3 q; c! e  G. u- B跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回忆~~~~

沅湘

Originally posted by 无墨 at 2006-6-15 12:58 PM:
  n* }# i9 F  e! ^* o0 J( n2 m哎,说起来俺在西安呆过呢!呵呵!
当时觉得西安很乱,小偷很多,后来听说还有顺口溜:\"西安三大害,警察小偷元气袋\",也不知道真的假的
. [1 @! P( ?6 H* T) D0 J. R跟你这诗中的美完全不一样啊,
不过倒是蹬过骊山,恩,等我写点西安的回 ...

我的这个西女是Lucy （露西，西方文化中一个很有名气的才女）转过来的，你一定也知道，故意说是西安的女子吧。等着看你的关于西安女子的文章。

新竹

Who is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-15 11:57 PM:
# R9 q# e  j) a9 F& @# n+ A7 o% kWho is this Lucy? Remember Wordsworth\'s Lucy?

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Haven\'t seen you on line for a while. I guess you are very busy. Take care of your pretty voice, please.

. A. A/ T3 L2 m) NThere are many Lucy girls in English literature. I had both Wordsworth\'s and E. Browning\'s in mind.

新竹

There is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.
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  }* e8 o& i) VOf all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.
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5 E" o+ q- S; z5 W+ y! e% JI am already burnt out (like aways). I would like to watch the World Cup too, but the TV is broken. You take care too.

沅湘

Originally posted by 新竹 at 2006-6-26 02:34 PM:
There is a line, I think, from Wordsworth \"What if Lucy is dead?\". I remember having a discussion about that in class.
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Of all your Chinese poems, I like this best. It\'s such a jem.
6 U8 j2 Y: X4 ~* u7 l/ { ...

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9 g/ V5 E3 c! I, z( I0 P+ Q& BThere you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

oy98oy

顶才子!

林子丹

Originally posted by 沅湘 at 2006-6-27 01:59 AM:
" L) q: d) W$ K* [+ W8 DThere you go. Thanks. But I thought you would like my translation better. I always like novels better than poems. The former can contain the latter but not the other way around.

7 s7 O9 p  K7 v0 aThe Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.

Nevertheless, this poem is good. ))

沅湘

Originally posted by 林子丹 at 2006-6-28 08:32 PM:
8 d2 {4 K  J% q  H! L2 n  rThe Same here. I love novels much better than peoms. I hate to say, but poems always puzzle me.

+ e- ]8 T2 p$ J0 y1 R1 k+ ^Nevertheless, this poem is good. ))